Tuesday, August 13, 2019
My Speech about How to Be a Great Immigrant
Hi Recently my school has been holding a Speech Comp and I along with the rest of the class am entering my speech to the judges (AKA my teachers) this speech will teach you on how to be a great Immigrant. Please enjoy. PS read Cue Cards Because main text is a draft copy.
My feedback was very positive but my presentation was slightly off my content was what gave me most of my positive feedback Something I could improve on was maybe my delivery and presentation of the content as well as being more clear towards the audience.
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Hi there, my name is Jett and I am a student in room 3 at gisborne intermediate School. I really like how you had lots of information. Have you thought about making your title bigger and maybe only using your cue card form instead of both. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://gisintJettw. blogspot.co.nz.
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