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Hello Muzammil, I like your story animation about the bird. The falcon swooping in and picking up the bird was a surprise and added interest to the story. I think the falcon could be much bigger than the bird to make it look more realistic. Mrs Krausse
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Hello Muzammil,
ReplyDeleteI like your story animation about the bird. The falcon swooping in and picking up the bird was a surprise and added interest to the story. I think the falcon could be much bigger than the bird to make it look more realistic.
Mrs Krausse